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Pick Your Poison: Death by ~GrimPumkin:iconGrimPumkin:


©2008 ~GrimPumkin
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Submitted: February 18
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This is my contest entry
Theme: Death

Sometimes when a loved one passes on, we the living are held down to earth by the darkness that surrounds us.
I hope it's not too late
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~Fifield:iconFifield: Feb 19, 2008, 1:13:34 AM Mood: Wow!
Kind of looks like the gate children have a hold of him. But what it means is so true.

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"I kill therefore I am! That's all I need to know!"
~ChosenDude:iconChosenDude: Feb 19, 2008, 2:48:46 PM
dang... that looks just like Full Metal Alchemist... but its really good ^^

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"Why. So. SERIOUS!!!!???"
~FairGwenevre:iconFairGwenevre: Feb 19, 2008, 3:38:59 PM
That's some deep stuff...

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"Enjoy everything!"
~Yotsuba&!
~GrimPumkin:iconGrimPumkin: Feb 19, 2008, 3:46:21 PM
Thanks :D

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~GrimPumkin:iconGrimPumkin: Feb 19, 2008, 3:47:16 PM
Thanks man.
I didn't think about it but you're right. That does look like FMA...
Oh well

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~ChosenDude:iconChosenDude: Feb 19, 2008, 3:50:30 PM
lol, FMA ROCKS so in comparison, YOU PIC ROCKS!! =D

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"Why. So. SERIOUS!!!!???"
~giacbk:icongiacbk: Feb 20, 2008, 3:40:08 AM
HORROR! haha ^^ Nice!

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Optimus Prime: Good Job everyone! Megatron was defeated with only 50 humans killed in the cross fire, A NEW RECORD!

autobots: HURRAY!
*Ashley425:iconAshley425: Feb 25, 2008, 6:47:14 PM
Hello! My name is Ashley, I am one of the judges for the Pick Your Poison Contest!

I really like the concept you're portraying for the theme. The hands of darkness pulling down the character looks very dramatic and by their faces you can feel a sense of emotion.

This may not be such a big deal, but why are the characters drawn inside this rectangular shape? I might have preferred them just to be drawn without this rectangular shape imprisoning them. And even if you still want to keep the shape, I would consider centering the shape so that it's not skewed to the left like it is currently.

Overall, I'm giving you a 5/10. I love the theme, but I think aesthetically, you could improve. The hair seems to be very stiff, and it would make the image more dramatic if you could see strands of hair flowing from the character or something of the sort. I would also like to recommend looking up some basic hand anatomy. I like the concept with the hands, but it would be nice to see them drawn with more definition. I do like your drawing, and I can tell you put a great deal of effort into it. Great work! :)
~GrimPumkin:iconGrimPumkin: Feb 26, 2008, 7:16:27 PM
Thanks :D
The reason I used the weird rectangle shape thing is that when someone dies they get a wider perspective than the person who's still alive. If that makes any since. Also, my brother was telling me how much this picture sucks the other day so I know it's not very good. I was rushing on it cuz the deadline was coming up and I had to finish it in my art class.

Anyway, thank you for the comment and for taking the time to look at my picture. :]
Good luck with judging

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